Monday, July 14, 2008

"इल्जाम ले लो"


"इल्जाम ले लो"


ज़ब्त से कुछ काम ले लो,
ख़ुद पे यह इल्जाम ले लो...

जिसका डर था हो न जाए,
उसको अपने नाम ले लो .

कुछ नशा है उखडा उखडा,
आओ हम से जाम ले लो ...

गिर न जाएं देखना तुम ,
अपने हाथों थाम ले लो...

नाम मेरा क्या करोगी ,
आशिके बदनाम ले लो "







15 comments:

Anonymous said...

This poem again seems written with heart only
See, All the picture and the poetry itself, All describing ..

Burning Hearts, A Gorgeous Woman (YOU Are More Than Gorgeous), Soothing Wine & the TIME .. WOW

Impeccable !!!

Amit verma

Anonymous said...

bahut hi umdaa. likhte rahiye. mujhe behas pasand aai. thanks

WAFAA KI KOI KASAR NA CHHODEE
IS TARAH DEEWANAA KIYAA TUMANE

AMIT k sagar

Anonymous said...

wonderful vakai pad kar kadam behkne lage hai---keep it up
picturization ke aage shabd chote pad gaye hai

kise dekhoon kise chahoon, kiska naam loon
ye phool sa chehra ya "full" sa jaam loon

"surender kumar abhhin"

Anonymous said...

'sulag raha hoon,
aur dhuan bhee utha huaa hai

main aa gaya hoon kahan pe dekho yeh kaisa sama hua hai
log hain jai jai kar kartay
hamen na djaaney ye kya hua hai

tumharee nazren tumharee baaten
tumhare chitron
ko dekhta hoon
nasha wohee hai jo chadh ke bolay
hamain kuch aisa nasha hua hai

kareeb aao ki tum ko dekhen
kahan chupee ho waraq ke peechay
zara jhalak jo ke dikh rahi hai
isee se kaisa saman hua hai............."---

Seema .......again across boudary.....a big six

Congratulations.....
tumahara prashansak

Anonymous said...

wonderful job

op

अवनीश एस तिवारी said...

well written. Its in meter almost.

Good

Avaneesh

Anonymous said...

Seema Ji,

All your poems are really great and full of pains which everybody in one or other way is facing in his life and full of truth of life.

You are just great

I really like all your poems


Regards

Your admirer

mukesh said...

ज़ब्त से कुछ काम ले लो,
ख़ुद पे यह इल्जाम ले लो...

जिसका डर था हो न जाए,
उसको अपने नाम ले लो .

कुछ नशा है उखडा उखडा,
आओ हम से जाम ले लो ...

गिर न जाएं देखना तुम ,
अपने हाथों थाम ले लो...

नाम मेरा क्या करोगी ,
आशिके बदनाम ले लो "







wounderful fir se dher sari subhkamnaye

Anonymous said...

NAAM UNAKA JAB BHI AYA HAI KAHIN

LOG SAB DEKHA KIYE MERI TARAF

Virendra

Udan Tashtari said...

नाम मेरा क्या करोगी ,
आशिके बदनाम ले लो "


--bahut umda.

advocate rashmi saurana said...

seemaji, aap bhut sundar gahare bhav ke sath kavitye likhti hai. bhut badhiya. or bhi sundar rachanao ke liye meri shubhakamnaye.

Anonymous said...

Ilzaam le lo, waah beautiful, good creation......
AAP BHI SUNIYE CHAAR LINE

JO BHI KARO SALIKE SE HAR KAAM LE LO
IBTIDAA JO HO TO KHUDA KA NAAM LE LO
MANZIL KADAM CHUMEGI TUMHARE YAQINAN
UN FARISHTON KA HASEEN PAYAAM LE LO
SURINDER RATTI

vipinkizindagi said...

नाम मेरा क्या करोगी ,
आशिके बदनाम ले लो

good & best wishes

'ताइर' said...

sidha hi ilzam...sidhai hi vaar...bahot khub...

नाम मेरा क्या करोगी ,
आशिके बदनाम ले लो

ye sher to kamaal hain...

मोहन वशिष्‍ठ said...

शराबी के दो ही ठिकाने
ठेके जाए या थाने

बखूब