"जिदगी भर यही सोचता रह गया"
मुझसे मुंह मोड़ कर तुम को जाते हुए,
मूक दर्शक बना देखता रह गया ,
क्या मिला था तुम्हें दिल मेरा तोड़ कर,
जिंदगी भर यही सोचता रह गया ???
भूलने के लिये तुमको हम ने जतन,
क्या नहीं हैं किये ए जान-ऐ-मन,
उतने ही याद आये हो तुम रात दिन,
अपनी यादों से मैं जूझता रह गया???
रास्ता जब बनी रास्ते की गली,
मैं जो गुजरा कभी धडकने बढ़ गयी,
एक खिड़की खुली और तुम्हें देख कर,
मैं जहाँ पर खडा था खडा रह गया???
"जिदगी भर यही सोचता रह गया"
http://swargvibha.freezoka.com/kavita/all%20kavita/Seema%20Gupta/zindagi%20bhar%20yahe%20sochata%20rah%20gaya.htm (http://www.swargvibha.tk/)
http://www.sahityakunj.net/LEKHAK/S/SeemaGupta/zindgi_bhar_yahi_sochata_rah.htm
14 comments:
Kahin me bhi to Zindgi bhar sochta nahi reh jaoonga??
Abhi bhi mann aisa ho raha he, mano roo doon, ya kahin kisi sookhi si zameen per door tak niharoon.....
-- Amit
Wow...:)
Nice one seema. Specially 1st and 3rd paragraph is cool.
I dont like 2nd para. Sorry for that.
Manish
abhi mujhay react karna kitna mushkil ho raha hai. zingi kay badlao say soch par bhi kitna asar padta hai.mai pahley jisko sochta tha woh uskay janay kay asar main thaa,uskay gham mein tha lekin aaj is baat ko kitna saccha dekh raha hoon ki "maarnay walay say bachanay wala bahut bada hota hai" aaj bachanay waala mera shareek-e-hayat ho gaya, aur main ab usee ki duniya mein kho gaya hoon, usee ko sochta hoon usee par naghmain likhnay ka dil karnay laga haiy.yeh sab main isliye likh raha hoon kyunki aap ki kavita eik sacchi kavita hai..........wirah ko bayan kar rahee hai aur ek pankti jo amit ho gayee hai wo yeh hai"zindgi bhar yehi sochta rah gaya"..........
ab naye chraagh jale hain aur unki roshni nay meray andheron ko door bagaa diya.
............main aap ka aap ki sheree ka aabharee hoon Seema ji.
..........Prashansak Shubh chintak
u hav god gift,i like so much
op
भई, उदास कर दिया आपने हमें :)
It feels like when you were writing this one in particular, you were either pretty sad or thinking very deeply
And belive me, when I was reading this 'rachna' from you, I felt the same pain, deapth, sorrow and lost the way you might have felt..
ARCHEAV
kya mila tha tumhe dil mera tod kar?ek aesa sawal hai,jiska aaj tak kisi ko zawab nahi aaya.dil tut jate hai aawaz bhi nahi hoti,,
rachnakar badhi ki patra hai kyonki shabdo ke madhyam se dil ki awaaz ko poetry jitna sundar bana dena ek kala to hai hi..ek sanjeevni bhi hai...jab dil par girne wale sitam....gumm na bankar saathi ban jayen to ve dard hi dava ho jaate hai......... Seema ji you r fabluous..SURE
kya mila tha tumhe dil mera tod kar?ek aesa sawal hai,jiska aaj tak kisi ko zawab nahi aaya.dil tut jate hai aawaz bhi nahi hoti,,
rachnakar badhi ki patra hai kyonki shabdo ke madhyam se dil ki awaaz ko poetry jitna sundar bana dena ek kala to hai hi..ek sanjeevni bhi hai...jab dil par girne wale sitam....gumm na bankar saathi ban jayen to ve dard hi dava ho jaate hai......... Seema ji you r fabluous..SURE
main kahi kavi na ban jau,tere pyar main o kavita
op
good very very good seema ji,
usne dimaag payaa tha aur dil ki gahraai me utar nahin payaa.
prem men ekatmtaa hoti hai varna kya pal ke sochta rah jaye.
tairnewale pani ko dekhte hi kud jaate hai, sochne vale kinaare baithe rahte hai gahrai ko soch kar
achchaa likha hai
compliments
उतने ही याद आये हो तुम रात दिन,
अपनी यादों से मैं जूझता रह गया???
बहुत ही उदासी भरी नज्म है सीमा जी उदास कर गई
bahut sukhad laga idhar aakar.
aake andar bepanah dard hai, ehsaas ki mojen hain aur khoobtar alfazon ki jhamghat hai.
likhe rahen.zore-qalam aur zyada, yahi dua hai..
मुझसे मुंह मोड़ कर तुम को जाते हुए,
मूक दर्शक बना देखता रह गया ,
क्या मिला था तुम्हें दिल मेरा तोड़ कर,
जिंदगी भर यही सोचता रह गया ???
bahot khub likha hai seemaji aapne..
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