tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6122878425095126067.post7004310934544687465..comments2023-09-03T13:54:16.522+05:30Comments on "seemadani ke kalam se": "बात बनाऊं कैसे "seema guptahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02590396195009950310noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6122878425095126067.post-39555815827042235822008-07-15T13:25:00.000+05:302008-07-15T13:25:00.000+05:30वो जो आया है तो अब उसको नहीं जाने दूँगा,लोग पूछेंग...वो जो आया है तो अब उसको नहीं जाने दूँगा,<BR/>लोग पूछेंगे के मैं उस से मिला हूँ कैसे???????<BR/><BR/><BR/>isske agee kuch nhi likh shkta.Mukesh Garghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12785030120693046928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6122878425095126067.post-16266420652409668872008-07-04T13:34:00.000+05:302008-07-04T13:34:00.000+05:30kya baat hai ji...ek kasak si jagadi aapki kavita ...kya baat hai ji...<BR/>ek kasak si jagadi aapki kavita ne...<BR/><BR/>keep it up plz<BR/>and thanks for comment.vishnu-luvinghearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01417685226982660076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6122878425095126067.post-88614099113815592672008-06-27T20:47:00.000+05:302008-06-27T20:47:00.000+05:30सीमा जी मेरे पास आपकी रचनाओं की तारीफ करने के लिए ...सीमा जी मेरे पास आपकी रचनाओं की तारीफ करने के लिए लफ़ज नहीं हैं बहुत अच्छा और एक अरदास भी है आपसे कि आप जो ये फोटोज लगाते हो यदि आपके पास बडे साइज की हों ये फोटोज तो कृप्या बताना या मुझे मेल कर सकते हो तो मेल कर दें मेरा मेल आईडी हे mohanvashisth0449@gmail.comमोहन वशिष्ठ https://www.blogger.com/profile/00939783274989234267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6122878425095126067.post-8946272262154309202008-06-26T10:28:00.000+05:302008-06-26T10:28:00.000+05:30Bahut hee Sunder Rachana Hai. aabhar. RegardsAshi...Bahut hee Sunder Rachana Hai.<BR/> <BR/> <BR/>aabhar.<BR/> <BR/>Regards<BR/>Ashish Kumar 'Anshu'Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6122878425095126067.post-51121593373925271442008-06-25T21:16:00.000+05:302008-06-25T21:16:00.000+05:30तुम अगर रूठ गयी हो तो मनाऊं कैसे,बात जो मुझ से नही...तुम अगर रूठ गयी हो तो मनाऊं कैसे,<BR/>बात जो मुझ से नही बनती बनाऊं कैसे..<BR/><BR/>इन्हीं फिकरों मैं मेरी रात कटी जाती है,<BR/>दिले-ऐ-बरबाद की तन्हाई हटाऊँ कैसे..<BR/><BR/>Seema ji kin shabdon mein taariff karuun , samajh nahiin paa rahaa huun.Ghazal kehne kaa aapkaa andaaz kabil-e-taariff hi nahiin hai dilkash bhi hai.aisa lagtaa hai ki aap rubruu gungunaa rahii hein.Meri tamaam duayein aapke saath...Pramod Kumar Kush 'tanha'https://www.blogger.com/profile/08981831872947912755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6122878425095126067.post-82443540500661018462008-06-25T09:37:00.000+05:302008-06-25T09:37:00.000+05:30I can't amezing ur thinking and ur mently conditio...I can't amezing ur thinking and ur mently condition. I think u have any very good pain that u enjoy...? Very-very good, I think if u write these poems u r not there ur mind going any other world where u, u and u and ...? <BR/> <BR/>enjoy this<BR/> <BR/> <BR/>with warm wishes<BR/>Imran JalandhariAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6122878425095126067.post-83240630100672900022008-06-24T17:04:00.000+05:302008-06-24T17:04:00.000+05:30वो जो आया है तो अब उसको नहीं जाने दूँगा, लोग पूछें...वो जो आया है तो अब उसको नहीं जाने दूँगा, <BR/>लोग पूछेंगे के मैं उस से मिला हूँ कैसे???????<BR/>is poem ki shan me mere paas pryapt words nahi hai is liye aapki poems se hi apne dil ki baat kah raha hoon.अभिन्नhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06944616806062137325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6122878425095126067.post-14946258463133553952008-06-24T15:23:00.000+05:302008-06-24T15:23:00.000+05:30"kisee tarah se na poora huaa hamara safarhar aik ..."kisee tarah se na poora huaa hamara safar<BR/>har aik gaam pay manzil thee rasta bankar<BR/><BR/>hameen bhataktay rahay manzilon ki chaahat mein<BR/>sadaa-e dasht banee apnee rahguzar bankar<BR/><BR/>kisee nay haal jo poocha to hum samajhtay rahay<BR/>lo aa gaya hai koyee aaj humsafar bankar<BR/><BR/>nameen thee aankh mein phir bhee to muskuraatay rahay<BR/>hamaare saath chalee zindagee zaher bankar<BR/><BR/>hamaara dil naheen maana usee ko paa hi gaya<BR/>raha tha pichlay janam mein jo humsafar bankar"<BR/><BR/>.................likha to tha 'beshumar bechainiyon' kay liyay lekin uspay , successful naheen ho paaa raha hoon.........<BR/><BR/>..............'chakor'Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6122878425095126067.post-13759792019369811412008-06-24T14:01:00.000+05:302008-06-24T14:01:00.000+05:30REALLY BEAUTIFUL POEM MADAM KEEP IT UP AND KEEP WR...REALLY BEAUTIFUL POEM MADAM<BR/> <BR/>KEEP IT UP AND KEEP WRITING SUCH LOVELY POEMS<BR/>prabha.dashAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com